Decided to Try my hand at Flash. So this is my first Pony Animation! ik its simple.. but i have a very taxing time schedule so I don't have much time to work on things i like :/ But anyways, It was fun! ^^ let me know what i should animate.. i want to animate but i cant think of anything
Note: Sorry for the bad sound quality.. If someone could let me know how to get my music into flash without compromising the quality, it would be greatly appreciated! FIXED!
I love how you did the smooth animation with Rainbow Dash flying. She looks as if she were flying in the night (according to the background).
Her wing animation is show quality perfect too. In fact, her entire body movement in flying is show quality perfection. You did an excellent job with this peice of animation.I like how the music "20 Percent Cooler" was put into this animation. It fits in perfectly while Rainbow Dash is soaring through the skies. Something so simple that you animated can actually be pretty awesome! Great work on this!
the vision is great, you can see every little aspect of the animation, and almost every star like flash. but originality isn't as good, Ive seen so many people do rainbow dash flying fast like this, but i have never seen her amongst stars. the technique? well, not to get too technical, but the cutie mark is a little too big, and the tail is going wild, usually it would be going straight, like the mane. the impact, it really makes you focus on the tail, as it moves the most, bit then you also look at the mane and hair a lot too, so starts for that. all in all, its fantastic.
Not bad at all. Some of the body movements could stand to be a bit more fluid, but it's pretty good. The back legs, I would make pointed. Ponies point their hooves when flying, her hooves look flat like she's standing.
I love how you did the smooth animation with Rainbow Dash flying. She looks as if she were flying in the night (according to the background).
Her wing animation is show quality perfect too. In fact, her entire body movement in flying is show quality perfection. You did an excellent job with this peice of animation.I like how the music "20 Percent Cooler" was put into this animation. It fits in perfectly while Rainbow Dash is soaring through the skies. Something so simple that you animated can actually be pretty awesome! Great work on this!
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