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Second attempt at flash ponies, first attempt at Luna!

As with the last one. I know its short, but im really just testing the waters here. Am i any good at this? Let me know! :D

Song: Celestia Origins extended battle theme. By: Makkon

Background by: :iconxpesifeindx:

Flash Puppet by: :iconjordo76: and :icondileak:

Regards,
Dylan
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:iconalissajuett:
i love looking at this, its one of those artworks that make you focus on whats important; the actual pony. i don't actually think i have ever seen a good animation of Luna. this is one of those good ones, one that has almost the exact same looks and personality actions. but, for the technique, i don't get the water lines, i cant see any other form of water movement in the picture. the impact that the picture has on you is that you really think that Princess Luna is a serious and high standard pony and you have definitely reflected this in the animation. i would love to see more of these from you.
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:iconsilverdragonfox:
Beautiful work. Are you considering more animation work?
Also, is it possible to download song?
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I-TwistedFury-I Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love art and animation! and i plan on doing more in the future, but im pretty busy atm with work and just life XP also i dont have a download for the song but you can search it up and im sure you can find one! :D 
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PsychicWalnut May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work.

Aside from items previously mentioned, the only thing I found that could use improvement are the sparkle fields in the mane and tail.

The mane and tail sparkles are always clipped within the dark blue field. The current animation has them in the translucent area and even entirely outside the mane and tail. In addition, I think the sparkles are turning black at some point in their rotation. Something tells me they should be translucent or a 50% alpha white at that stage.

I see you also added some sparkle to her shoes. This is nice, as I've seen this and even vectored it before. For added effect, you can even add the occasional sparkle to her chest plate as well, but not a lot. It's not as shiny as the shoes.
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I-TwistedFury-I May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the critique! sadly, this puppet was not made by me! :D i only animated it..
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:icondeathguard-lundmark:
The water kinda reminds me of Pokemon...
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:iconinurantchan:
Very good fluid motion on the hair. On her tail, where the motion starts, I think the motion should start a little closer to the base (the top part of the tail only). Just because it look very stiff when the motion begins. If that makes any sense lol
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I-TwistedFury-I Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the feedback! ill keep that in mind :D
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CinemaCaesar Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic music for the most epic princess!!!
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I-TwistedFury-I Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconmkauf84:
The ripples seem to rapid
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