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Derpy Chief by I-TwistedFury-I Derpy Chief by I-TwistedFury-I
Made this in tribute to the upcoming release of HALO 4!

Derpy Chief is best Chief!

Be sure to visit my page and let me know what you think! and what you want to see in the future!

~Dylan
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:iconportaljumper339:
Well shit, way to make this the hardest damn critique I've ever done.

Vision: What to say, what to say... First, I must say that your style is getting much better overall from a first glance, and you should be proud of that.

Originality: I have seen Derpy, I have seen Halo ponies, but never have I seen the two out together like this before. I am a massive fan of both Derpy and Halo, so it is really hard for me to think of any constructive criticism. That being said, I am finding something very odd about the fact that she is standing on her hind legs and actually holding her Assault Rifle, when it would make more sense for her to be on all fours and have the gun maybe harnessed to her side somehow. I do like the bubbles on the chest plate and the smily on the gun, but the aforementioned issue and the fact that she has no visor are kinda tearing me out of the picture a bit.

Technique: Not much to say here, but I can tell you that your technique is really improving. I especially like how detailed you made her wings, and the smoke from the gun barrel was a nice touch. Coulda used a background, though.

Impact: Overall, not as astounding as some of your previous work, but speaking as a MLP and Halo fan, I do like this picture, and it will be going in my favorites and on my iPad.

Overall: A great little picture, with only a couple of design decisions that I think should be remedied if you ever decide to do something like this again. In case you were wondering, I have a bunch of pictures that I have uploaded, and if you ever have the time I would like you to do a little critiquing for me.
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Spazzpants Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
we now know the true face of the chief.
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AruoraOkami Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OH HELLZ YEAH!
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I-TwistedFury-I Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Thought I'd try shooting my way out, derp things up a bit" :D
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AruoraOkami Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd love to play H4 but my xbox blew up,thanks Albert... :icontruestoryplz: "I don't always derp,but when I do I be sure to say 'I don't just know what went wrong'.:iconderpy-hooves: Is doctor hooves the compu girl blue one?Oh whats her name?
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I-TwistedFury-I Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh lol you are talking about Cortana!! I should draw dr Whooves as Cortana and put him in her hoof! :D
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AruoraOkami Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAH yeah! Most defeinaly
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zacorasfollower Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
go derpy
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I-TwistedFury-I Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
this is amazing
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I-TwistedFury-I Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you kindly! :D
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